Thank you for telling me that I'm failing to see how I'm reproducing the dynamics I'm trying to critique by only describing my Korean colleague / fresh meat and the black girl in relation to others and myself.

that is unstable and lets me operate in that discovery mode that i can create within and also produce works from.

something religious, a kind of complex,

it will get lighter

, something washing, cleansing, revealing, etc.


so i or you can author smaller fragments that get arranged

no longer writing in the third person

Above and in front two birds are darting in and out of a tree. Sometimes they collide to fight or maybe mate, but I can't really make it out in the low light. It's just after

dusk

, I have nothing to do, I'm watching them, trying to figure it out.

I'm trying to picture the scene inside, like I was trying to picture the scene in the tree.

"Put a blanket."

Wed, 11 Nov 2025 21:12:41

It Will Get Lighter

I know that if I try to make this entry any more than it is I will ruin it.

I wonder if the birds knew I was watching?

yes

Lift Analysis



and so on. not wanting the rhyming / clanging

you know who you are. no more time, not like

1

. way too specific.