Thank you for telling me that I'm failing to see how I'm reproducing the dynamics I'm trying to critique by only describing my Korean colleague / fresh meat and the black girl in relation to others and myself.


Garden Post-Dusk, Birds Above, In Another Life

Above and in front two birds are darting in and out of a tree. Sometimes they collide to fight or maybe mate, but I can't really make it out in the low light. It's just after

dusk

, I have nothing to do, I'm watching them, trying to figure it out.

something religious, a kind of complex,

it will get lighter

, something washing, cleansing, revealing, etc.

IWGD

Better Lift

Thank you, Jack

Imprint, memory, impact, representation, impression


with this post net clarity and the hours of nothing that followed I realise this is going to be awful.

currently

Lift Analysis

I know that if I try to make this entry any more than it is I will ruin it.

1

Rain, starting


it holds me to something (you, now). I love editing!

and so on. not wanting the rhyming / clanging