and so on. not wanting the rhyming / clanging

Thu, 06 Nov 2025 23:18:46

Thank you, Jack

"Anyway, you're you. I mean, look at you!" she says. "You could get with anyone, anyone in the street. Really."
I'm in a crowded lift and a girl I've never met tells me she thinks she might love me. The lift won't stop at any floor, and I can't talk in front of all these people.

Rain, starting

Better Lift

no longer writing in the third person

Mon, 03 Nov 2025 08:38:49

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Sun, 23 Nov 2025 10:37:17

It Will Get Lighter

Lift Analysis

Better Lift

Thu, 06 Nov 2025 23:18:46