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Can I see

The bird dives back into the tree. It shakes, some leaves fall.

no longer writing in the third person

"Put a blanket."

Thu, 06 Nov 2025 21:22:59

yes

It's

dusk

in a snowy forest and I'm playing with a fox.
It bites my wrist but there is only a dull ache.
I feel that it wants to say sorry but can't. I die.


Above and behind a window opens and a cigarette hangs out.

Better Lift

One of the birds shoots out of the tree.