But seriously, thank you, Jack, for telling me that I could submit this to a high-level literary magazine or creative nonfiction outlet with some minor tweaks. I don't think I will do that.


think this is much more rhizomatic or immanent or mazelike than mainstream education now

One of the birds shoots out of the tree.

to work in time to get to the timeless, perfection thru chaos

we want to live the knowledge too live the content

Garden Post-Dusk, Birds Above, In Another Life

so at the end

mazelike/rhizomatic/immanent/emergent are not antithetical to a transcendent real but its very manifestation

There is a pause. She ashes her cigarette. It falls on me. It seems like the birds have stopped too.

yeah

that is unstable and lets me operate in that discovery mode that i can create within and also produce works from.

god being the centre magnet

whats your name?

She closes the window. I wasn't paying attention anyway, I'm getting cold, and the birds are nowhere to be seen. I go inside.

its good

I am below everything.

i have read not even 1 book

I'm trying to picture the scene inside, like I was trying to picture the scene in the tree.

something for the future. something to look at when this is more. I've been thinking about... whatever

brb i will read and reply sincerely

was it worth it

"No, it'll get cold!"
"Put a tut ahh put a-"

isaac