plato
I wonder if she knew I was down there listening? I wonder if she would've said something more true, more personal, more raw, more heartfelt, more harsh, more seductive, more freeing, more exposing, more risky, more romantic, more rude, more honest, more anything, if there hadn't been an audience.
Sun, 02 Nov 2025 21:54:03
Thu, 06 Nov 2025 23:18:46
She closes the window. I wasn't paying attention anyway, I'm getting cold, and the birds are nowhere to be seen. I go inside.
One of the birds shoots out of the tree.
"No, it'll get cold!"
"Put a tut ahh put a-"
no longer writing in the third person
I'm trying to picture the scene inside, like I was trying to picture the scene in the tree.
Lift Analysis
its performative
Thank you, Jack