with this post net clarity and the hours of nothing that followed I realise this is going to be awful.

IWGD

I'm trying to picture the scene inside, like I was trying to picture the scene in the tree.

Better Lift

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a lot of what i've been doing has been some imaginary screenshot or recording of his website, something that could be found within it

so i or you can author smaller fragments that get arranged

One of the birds shoots out of the tree.

It's

dusk

in a snowy forest and I'm playing with a fox.
It bites my wrist but there is only a dull ache.
I feel that it wants to say sorry but can't. I die.

Lift Analysis

Style

"No, it'll get cold!"
"Put a tut ahh put a-"

Thank you, Jack

"Anyway, you're you. I mean, look at you!" she says. "You could get with anyone, anyone in the street. Really."

no longer writing in the third person