yes
with this post net clarity and the hours of nothing that followed I realise this is going to be awful.
currently
no longer writing in the third person
Today I felt like starting
Thank you for telling me that I'm failing to see how I'm reproducing the dynamics I'm trying to critique by only describing my Korean colleague / fresh meat and the black girl in relation to others and myself.
We gather around the start of a causeway down to the Thames. It's a pretty cold night and there's a breeze coming off the river.
...
I've found the girl, or she's found me, and we're smoking a cigarette while we watch the silhouettes of the French Raj and his fireworks bearer down on the bank.
ion
Sun, 02 Nov 2025 23:49:08
yeah
We stand there laughing. The fireworks go off behind him.