much more tactility
something religious, a kind of complex,
it will get lighter
, something washing, cleansing, revealing, etc.
"Anyway, you're you. I mean, look at you!" she says. "You could get with anyone, anyone in the street. Really."
The bird dives back into the tree. It shakes, some leaves fall.
I'm trying to picture the scene inside, like I was trying to picture the scene in the tree.
its good
but really the thing should be autonomous
you cannot feed someone language, they have to speak
this is possible in mazelike research sprints on the internet
so at the end