Lift Analysis

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The bird dives back into the tree. It shakes, some leaves fall.

I'm in a crowded lift and a girl I've never met tells me she thinks she might love me.
The lift won't stop at any floor, and I can't talk in front of all these people.

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"No, it'll get cold!"
"Put a tut ahh put a-"

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"Put a blanket."
"Anyway, you're you. I mean, look at you!" she says. "You could get with anyone, anyone in the street. Really."

hiding from the rain

i got bored though because i knew all of the different arrangements of it. i probably needed to stick at it longer to get it dense enough to feel navigable in a way that was engaging to me

like first name

the only things i have read are just excerpts and 1 dialogue by plato fully and mcluhan's medium is the massage but it cannot be considered a book

send link

yes


not so on: yvf(wthw)

it holds me to something (you, now). I love editing!

Above and behind a window opens and a cigarette hangs out.

wow, you are the first stranger to write a textwall to me

was it worth it

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